I smell of last night’s fight against the beat.
The heat in that room grew exponentially with every
Bass bumpin melody.
The DJ started with filler beats to make me restless
and persisted until I couldn’t resist it.
He drizzled in
his honey spin
and there it was again –
I was sweatin beads of
Syncopation.
I was trapped there
until the morning sun, while he
rewrote my melody with his
synthesized rhythms.
I wanted to blast through my eardrums.
Let someone else’s voice sing me numb.
I wanted to let
my heart
keep time.
My blood flowed through scales of A minor,
Up and down staffed arms.
Danced knee deep in surround sound poundin tracks.
Toxic refrain seeped skin,
bass line pumped veins.
Bodies moved
to tunes of mutiny.
I tried to stop
but the sound caught me.
Off guard like down tempos;
I was afraid to skip a beat.
I tried to fight it.
Stiff toes still found ways to tap into song;
Even crossed arms couldn’t protect my chest for long.
My soul steppin habits couldn’t stand,
And I found myself
a slave
to the rhythm.
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I like the style of this. The relationship between the dancer and the music is really well expressed.
Comment by barbarianella 07.02.09 @ 8:06 am‘I was sweating beads of syncopation’.Love that line.
I can feel the conflict. I can feel the tension and finally the release. Sometimes even in the midst of captivity we are free.
Comment by An Imperfect Servant 07.04.09 @ 10:32 pm[...] And so I embarked upon a journey through the site and found another wonderful poem, “Against the Music,” that spoke of music and harmony, of struggle and captivity, and of slavery. Silence [...]
Pingback by The Poetry Corner 3 edition Volume 1 « Brainstew – impressions personafied 07.05.09 @ 10:23 amwow… this piece is amazing! its too good really… i love the form, breaks and blank space… uve definitely got it down… it really adds to the flow of the piece… just like music
theres too many good lines:
“He drizzled in/his honey spin/and there it was again –”
“I wanted to let/my heart/keep time.”
“Toxic refrain seeped skin,
bass line pumped veins.
Bodies moved
to tunes of mutiny.” …this part is so creative… great language
this one is dripping in imagery, sound and language as if i am a slave to the music as well… nice write!
Comment by k. sao 07.10.09 @ 3:46 am